Storyboard 2

I tries re-drawing the last two pages of the storyboard to make the difference between the two boys more obvious... I also added an extra scene of the door opening above the boy the audience can see where the door is exactly. While the teachers agree this version is better, I can't help but feel something is missing... It loses some of the drama when you take out the quick cuts back and forth between the two boys close up. I think I'll stick with this one for now, but I might try to use the best of both versions in the final animation depending on how the colours of the boys turn out.